G321: Rough Cut 1

Rough Cut 1 Feedback : An interesting piece - leaves the audience left wondering what is wrong with the boy, Some good shots in there - nice establishing shot and pan, close up and long shots. You need to put in your titles to make it look like a film opening. The film title needs to be at around 40 seconds, not at the end of the piece. You need institutional logos and to fill in the missing section.



We have looked at our feedback and we will try and take in what our feedback said and make the changes that are needed for rough cut 2. We are going to add a CC, move our film title, cut down the first shot and add institutional logos.

By Connor and Dan